Saturday, November 10, 2012

Were there more costs or benefits of industrialization in the late 1800's and early 1900's?

                                                                  Journal #4

Question-Were there more costs or benefits of industrialization in the late 1800's and early 1900's?

Answer-  There has been arguments whether there were more cost or benefits of industrialization in the late 1800's and early 1900's. My argument is there were more cost of  industrialization in the late 1800's and early 1900's. Industrialization during the 1870 and 1970 was American history where major shifts in the social,economic, and political framework of the country brought new machines and shifts for the American people. It was basically the movement  to a manufacturing lifestyle. During 1870 to 1970 it was all about money. Since the social and economy was going up that means more things were expensive. Phones and expensive clothing was coming out. Everyone wanted was nice meaning everyone bought things.  Furthermore, industrialization was more cost than benefits.

1 comment:

  1. Argument: 3
    Evidence: 2
    Transitions: 2
    Formal Style: 2
    Conclusion: 2

    11/20 (75) - Kimora, I like that you introduced the different perspectives in the beginning of your journal entry. Don't forget to use specific background information and vocabulary words throughout to help explain yourself. You also need to use "quotation marks" to show what pieces of information you took directly form a document.

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