Wednesday, October 17, 2012
Was life better or worse for African African after slavery?
Theres been questions based on if life was better or worse for African Americans after slavery.Some opinions are that life was worse for African Americans because they still remember the horriable pain and others claim that life was better becuase they get to be regular people now. My opinion is that life was better for African Americans after slavery. This is my opinion because they gained rights and independence, there rights became being able to vote and slavery being abolished meaning slavery can no longer happen. There independence came in when they had to find their own home and get employed.They learned how to be regular people and gain respect and become independent. Therefore, my opinion is that life was better for African Americans after slavery.
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Introduce Argument - 3
ReplyDeleteSupport with Evidence - 1.5
Transitions – 2
Formal Style – 2
Conclusion - 3
11.5/20 (75) - Kimora, I think you are doing a great job of including the parts you are supposed to in a general way. I would like to see you add more details and specifics in your evidence section, since I see you making an effort to include the different documents, but you do not name or quote from them.
You also should move away from "my opinion" and think of it like you are taking on an argument to convince others. You should be writing more formally and academic without "I" or "my."